My name is Shannon Watson and I was born in Toledo, Ohio but lived in Pensacola, Fl most of my life with my grandparents. I have been a member of the University of South Alabama Marching Band. I have been playing the clarinet for 9 years and wish to learn how to play other instruments. My major is Elementary Education and I love working and being around kids.
I have two sisters and three brothers who I love dearly. My favorite color is red and my hobbies are singing, dancing, drawing and reading. I love helping people and being able to have a positive affect on people. During my high school years, I have done a great amount of volunteering around my community and love making a difference.
You did not do the second part of the assignment on Randy Pausch. The bold title and line breaks were fine. There were a few instances where you could break a compound sentence into two regular sentences, for better grammar. The last thing is either spell out Florida or abbreviate Ohio, in your first sentence, to be consistent with your writing.
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